XXVII

(NaNoWriMo - Day 18)


Plans were quickly made for a journey to the Vencoshi valley. Because time was short, Inri agreed to carry the delegates on his back over mesa and plain to the next valley. Hedegar, Scaltard and Merkel were selected to go for their historical connection to the breaknuts and (this only in Merkel’s case) their size. Preparations were made throughout the afternoon, and once everything was ready, they shared a light meal. Inri told them then that they could go and speak to Susan for a little, if she was up to it.

Inri woke her gently, accompanied by Hedegar and Vixel. They brought her some of the broth Vixel and David had made for dinner. At Inri’s instruction, only a couple creatures were to see her at a time so she would not be overwhelmed by the attention.

“Susan, you have some visitors,” announced Inri, tapping her forehead with a wing tip. She slowly opened her eyes and Inri stepped back, letting the others greet her.

“Hedegar, Vixel,” she managed weakly. Vixel propped up her head with a pile of soft foliage lying nearby for such a purpose. She smiled, grateful to see her friends, then frowned, remembering the last conversation with Inri.

“You must plant the seed!” she said with firmness, though she was unable to raise her voice.

“There, there, dear,” soothed Vixel. “Don’t you worry about that. Inri has sorted things out. We shall be able to plant the seed and grow the tree and save you too. Never you mind. You will be getting better very soon. And to start with, you need to drink some of this. It will give you a little strength.”

She pushed a container full of broth before Susan’s lips, and helped her drink. She couldn’t manage very much, but it was a start, and Vixel left the bowl next to her so she could have more when she was ready.

“How do you feel?” asked Hedegar then, stepping forward, and hugging her arm with his small paws.
“A little better since Asl–Inri came. The pain is duller and I don’t feel so ill. But my head aches and my throat is rather parched. The sleep and Vixel’s soup have helped though.”

“Good,” he replied. “I was so worried about you. Seeing you lying there so hopeless and not being able to do anything about it this time…”

“You’ve shown your loyalty more than enough, my dear hedgehog,” Susan responded. “I still say you were more than brave taking on that adder.” She sighed then, and her friends realised just how tired and weak she looked.

“Well, we best be going. Inri promised us each only a moment with you.”

The two animals left her then, and Scaltard, Ratel and Merkel took their place. After a brief greeting, they too left and it was David’s turn.

David was not at all happy about being left till last, but he could not resist the will of Inri, who assured him it would be best that way; it would mean he could have more time with her since no one else would be waiting for their turn.

David slowly, almost shyly sat down on the ground beside her. He carried the guinea pig who sat now in his lap.

“Hello little fella,” said Susan, stroking the creature’s fur and therefore able to avoid addressing David directly for a little longer. It was only a moment, though and then she had to look at him.

“Susan…,” he began, unable to voice any of the things he wanted so desperately to say to her. Impulsively, he reached out for her hand that lay loosely at her side, and clasped it with in both of his. He stared at her hand and didn’t make eye contact.

They stayed like that for a few moments, both of them realising that now was not the time to talk about the past or future. The conversation needed to be had, but it could wait till Susan was better. David’s small gesture and her acceptance of did far more good than any words would have. At last, he dared to look at her face, and she smiled weakly. She then motioned in the direction of the bowl of soup, and David picked it up, and helped her to drink. She finished it this time and ventured a grateful thank you.

The food finished, she settled down into her bed again and closed her eyes. David took hold of her hand again and she did not recoil. He stayed there even as her breathing became deeper and she fell asleep again. He might have stayed there all night if Inri had not called him away.

“Thank you,” he said to the Eagle, realising he had been right to let him go last.

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